i felt a rotting albatross
around my neck was hung
the barrel of my .38
was pungent on my tongue
a deadly glass of poison
was lifted to my lips
the suicide solution
was at my fingertips
but then i realized
in the pit of my despair
that suicide is pointless if
there’s no one who would care
and that’s when i decided
on a plan so cold and cruel
i grabbed my automatic
and i strolled into the school
and all the while thinking
that the world would surely heed
the pain that they’d inflicted
to make me do this deed
and when the blood-bath ended
it was time to end it all
and so i blew my brains out
on the high school classroom wall
and now just like the albatross
i’m rotting here in hell
and yet the world remains unchanged
as far as i can tell
awful. a poignant and mind-blowing write. .
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Thank you!
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Powerful writing, sad commentary on true tragedies.
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its worse than sad. Thank you, Jay!
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This poem really got to me! Especially the last two lines. If I remember correctly, Robert Frost wrote a poem about a boy who gets his arm cut off while using a chain saw. After his death the rest of the people- since they were not the one dead, went back to their affairs.
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Yes, I love Robert Frost! Thank you, Susan!
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Heart breaking, isn’t it?
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It sure is, Lynn.
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I applaud you for writing this. Seems the only changes have been for the worse. 😞
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Thanks, Michele. Yea, it’s not my usual post, but the world isn’t always such a wonderful place.
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Sad…
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It is.
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This is an incredibly powerful poem, Michael. I was stunned by it.
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Thank you, Michael! Not everyone likes this kind of poem, as is reflected in the fewer likes than usual, but I’m glad you did!
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You make an excellent point. Some people don’t have the courage to actually kill themselves or want to take other people with them.
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Yes, thank you, Dawn!
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powerful indeed Michael
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Thanks, Mark!
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