michaeljordahl in poetry August 8, 2022 14 Words haiku 125 field of sunflowers yellow periscopes pop up looking for the sun –photo by me Share this: Share on X (Opens in new window) X Share on Facebook (Opens in new window) Facebook Like Loading... Related
I don’t title my haikus, otherwise i would’ve put ‘a sea of green’ in the first line; maybe better, but no title. Thanks, Susan!! LikeLiked by 2 people Reply
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Periscopes is a perfect description!
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I think so too, Sandy, thanks!!
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You bet!
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What a grand description! 🌻
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I don’t title my haikus, otherwise i would’ve put ‘a sea of green’ in the first line; maybe better, but no title. Thanks, Susan!!
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great metaphor —
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🙂
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