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  1. An Awesome post my friend! Loved the way you painted imagery into your verses and made the scene visible to our mind’s eye!! Also, loved your internal rhymes and great alliteration. I could close my eyes and listen to you reciting it and visualize it.
    Hey, I think you should repost this with you reciting it!! Let us hear the words from your heart with our ears!! šŸ˜ŠšŸ˜šŸŽāœØšŸ’•

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